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Nowadays, the society is more and more developmental. The Internet becomes useful and popular with everyone. But as we know, everything has two-side: advantages and disadvantages.
We can not deny that Internet has many advantages. It helps us to get more information faster. In addition, we can relax by Internet after a hard-working day such as: listening to online music, watching movies, playing games...Toward the students and even people who have job, they can study in the Internet. It's really convenient for us to do everything easier.
Beside the benefit of the Internet, there are some restrictions. For example: These days, in the world, there are many situations that the students use Internet too much and distracted in learning. Moreover, using Internet for a long time might causes harmfulness for your health. And sometimes, we could get virus while using the Internet. It's very dangerous.
However, Internet is really useful and necessary for our life.

"using Internet for a long time might causes harmfulness for your health": causes=>bỏ 's'

"the society" => bỏ 'the'

"The Internet becomes"=> The Internet has become [nếu bạn muốn nhấn mạnh]

"easier" => more easily

" the benefit of" => ' the benefits of'