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Tích Tích

Thành viên KSV
Tham gia
22/5/2012
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46
When I prepared to enter university, my mother asked me that what job I like. Many friends also asked me that. And I didn't have the answer. What about you? What kind of job is ideal for you? Someone said that they love money so that the ideal job is the job help them earn a lot of money. there are the job involve to business; market;... Besides, my friend shared that he liked the job which had more chance promotion because he wanted to have the status in sociaty. Sometimes, people also like the job which was respected by everyone such as teacher; doctor; police.... clearly each person has a different idea about ideal job. To me, ideal job is the job which makes me happy, fun. I think that if you keen on something you will try your best to do it which is one of important qualities. Morever, when choosing a job you should think about 3 questions: What do you like to do?; Where do you like to work? And How much money do you want? I hope you will find out the ideal job for you.
 

heart_soul

Thành viên mới
Tham gia
23/10/2011
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1
theo mình thì nói: i didn't have any answer .the job helps.many jobs concern to business, ....besides that( mình thấy không cần thiết) .không dùng to me( văn viết). i suppose (that).với mấy chỗ thêm s với bỏ the. chỉ biết vậy thôi. thông cảm. hì hì
 

hungvankim

I love HANU
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Tham gia
26/12/2010
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315
When I prepared to enter university, my mother asked me that what job do I like. Many friends also asked me same that. And I didn't have any answer. How about you? What kind of job is good for you? Someone said that they love money so that they choice the job which can help them earn a lot of money in the future. there are some jobs that involve to business; market;... Moreover, my friend shared that he liked the job which had more chances to get promotion because he wanted to have the status in society. Sometimes, people also like the job which was respected by everyone such as teacher; doctor; police.... clearly each person has a different idea about job. With me, a good job is the job which makes me comfortable and I can earn enough money to care for my family.I think that if you interested in your work, you will do it better. Morever, when choosing a job, you should think about 3 following questions: What do you like to do?; Where do you like to work? And How much money do you want? I hope that you will find out an appropriate job for yourself.

Mình học tiếng anh không giỏi nhưng cũng xin bon chen chút ý kiến thế này
 

mai_lady

past - present - future
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Tham gia
2/3/2012
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4.915
Ờ mình thì ... I agree with hungvankim ;) Giá mà tên nick tích tắc thì hay hơn... nhưng tích tích càng đặc biệt hơn :KSV@03:
 

Tích Tích

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Tham gia
22/5/2012
Bài viết
46
Em thấy đặc biệt thôi, anh không thấy tích tích khác vs tích tắc thông thường à :D
mai_lady: cảm ơn em nhé!!! hi, đúng là tích tích nghe nó mới lạ hơn là tích tắc, hì lâu rùi mình ko vào nên bỏ lỡ mất cơ hội hóng về tên nick của mình,
 

mai_lady

past - present - future
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Tham gia
2/3/2012
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4.915
mai_lady: cảm ơn em nhé!!! hi, đúng là tích tích nghe nó mới lạ hơn là tích tắc, hì lâu rùi mình ko vào nên bỏ lỡ mất cơ hội hóng về tên nick của mình,
Giờ ms cập nhật profile à? Bạn thôi nha, bằng tuổi mà ... dù sao cái avt ấn tượng đấy :D
 
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