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2/12/2021
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In recent days, there is an ongoing debate where the main factor of working is a salary or an enjoyable work. One can subscribe to the notion that making a large amount of cash is more vital than possessing a suitable profession. This essay, as my opinion leads to, will try to elaborate both views with some considerations as I agree that a satisfying job is better.

On the one hand, some people have a belief that money can bring anything including happiness. To be specific, In this cutting-edge society, earning a lot of money is quite an advantage as it follows people to do things they wanted. For instance, individuals find pleasure when purchasing luxury things such as rings, diamonds, and expensive cars or investing in the business to make more cash.

On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for people to have a satisfying job since materialism sometimes can not fulfill happiness. It is apparent that not all wealthy persons are joyful as the problems occur from many aspects: family, relationships,... Psychologists explained that if someone owns a suitable job, he or she will be much more comfortable and cheerful in life without any issues. Therefore, that person soon realizes that the key to happiness is not always about money, but sometimes it is about living happily every moment. Furthermore, when content with the career, people tend to be more active and exhilarating, it can lead to success and eventually make more profit.

To sum up, earning a huge amount of cash is not the primary factor to be happy. We spend most of our lives working, and thus it should be enjoyable.
 
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