Em muốn cải thiện kĩ năng viết của mình,mong các anh <chị > giúp đỡ ạ.
Nên từ nay em sẽ viết đoạn văn, sau đó các anh chị giúp em sưả sai được không ạ! em học ngữ pháp chưa được vững với lại dùng từ chưa chính xác lắm, các anh chị giúp em với nha... em hy vọng là khả năng viết Tiếng Anh của mình sẽ tiến bộ hơn : ngữ pháp, dùng từ, đặt câu...
cô giáo bảo viết nhiều thì kĩ năng viết sẽ tiến bộ hơn, nhưng em viết xong không có ai xem giúp hết
em có viết 1 đoạn kể lại 1 bộ phim em xem, hichic...anh chị xem giúp em với nha :
Today, I’m very happy when I am here, on Lewis and Clark, think about past expedition. That was lucky when we overcame an obstacle to return. Thinking again , I felt we were powerful, brave and luckily. Overcoming afraid of our self and of autochthon and severe weather conditions. That was our meet with autochthon. They look violent. Although we had been capable of beating them, we waited them to leave, and then we went on. Because we had enough weapons and they had hadn’t. We could win at this time but after leaving, they could come back. So, to void complications, we didn’t complex. That was clear – sighted. When the dark went, we might stay here and activity with them, unless we died because of cold weather. We performed dances and singed with them. The day after, we continued journey; and we received a girl’s help hand. She was 15 years old. She could speak autochthon language and help to translate We were on new landscapes, so we need a hand help and she could. We had a high mountain. It was higher than our image. If we were on foot, we would die on by the way because of shorting of foods and being tired. Then we decided to borrow horses of autochthon and she did.
We might overcome high mountain, jungle, water way, … then, we decided to split in two. A group person would go ahead and find a way. And it was exactly, we fought. The last problem was overcame a waterfall. We cut trees and made boats. The autochthons advised us not to overcome that waterfall, it was dangerous. We should be on foot. But we decided to overcome. And that was happy, we were successful and returned our home!
That was a journey which is interested!
Nên từ nay em sẽ viết đoạn văn, sau đó các anh chị giúp em sưả sai được không ạ! em học ngữ pháp chưa được vững với lại dùng từ chưa chính xác lắm, các anh chị giúp em với nha... em hy vọng là khả năng viết Tiếng Anh của mình sẽ tiến bộ hơn : ngữ pháp, dùng từ, đặt câu...
cô giáo bảo viết nhiều thì kĩ năng viết sẽ tiến bộ hơn, nhưng em viết xong không có ai xem giúp hết
em có viết 1 đoạn kể lại 1 bộ phim em xem, hichic...anh chị xem giúp em với nha :
Today, I’m very happy when I am here, on Lewis and Clark, think about past expedition. That was lucky when we overcame an obstacle to return. Thinking again , I felt we were powerful, brave and luckily. Overcoming afraid of our self and of autochthon and severe weather conditions. That was our meet with autochthon. They look violent. Although we had been capable of beating them, we waited them to leave, and then we went on. Because we had enough weapons and they had hadn’t. We could win at this time but after leaving, they could come back. So, to void complications, we didn’t complex. That was clear – sighted. When the dark went, we might stay here and activity with them, unless we died because of cold weather. We performed dances and singed with them. The day after, we continued journey; and we received a girl’s help hand. She was 15 years old. She could speak autochthon language and help to translate We were on new landscapes, so we need a hand help and she could. We had a high mountain. It was higher than our image. If we were on foot, we would die on by the way because of shorting of foods and being tired. Then we decided to borrow horses of autochthon and she did.
We might overcome high mountain, jungle, water way, … then, we decided to split in two. A group person would go ahead and find a way. And it was exactly, we fought. The last problem was overcame a waterfall. We cut trees and made boats. The autochthons advised us not to overcome that waterfall, it was dangerous. We should be on foot. But we decided to overcome. And that was happy, we were successful and returned our home!
That was a journey which is interested!
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